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NaPoWriMo #12 revision

One of my poems for NaPoWriMo was an attempt at a sonnet. Although I love the form, I am notoriously bad with meter, so I took that original draft to the Steel Phoenix writers meeting for help. I am actually quite proud that the second stanza appeared to be correct rhythmically!
Here is the updated version, with many thanks to the members of Steel Phoenix:
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Steel Phoenix

I’m heading out to the monthly meeting of the Steel Phoenix Writers Group, a local pagan writers group that gathers every third Thursday of the month at Borders. I printed out all the NaPoWriMo poems to date, we’ll see what more objective, unbiased eyes than mine think of them. And hopefully I’ll come home with # 15 ready to post.